Underworld Sues (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} underworldsues) wrote,@ 2003-11-02 00:30:00 |
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TITLE: His Princess
PERPETRATOR: living dead gurl
FULL NAME: Sonja
SPECIES: Human
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: According to the summary: "..meets a girl who looks like Sonja and even has the same name."
NOTES: It starts off with that looks like could be a good fic with a little polishing. Then the character possession and movie rewriting begins. The end of the prologue and then the first chapter is where it just descends into the flames. Word of advice, don't apologize for the spelling errors and make Word excuses. Beta. Beta now.
Lucian's thoughts were interupted when he heard the engines of a speeding car. He shook his head in shame, probably some dumb teenaged boy showing of his car to his girl friend. Something caught his eye a women crossing the street, Lucian's increased sense of sound could hear the engine of the car speeding faster. Then he realized that that women could actually be in danger.
His Lycan speed allowed him to travel faster then an ordinary human. He pushed the women aside and before the car smashed into him sending him over the top of the car before hitting the ground like the time Selene had hit him with her car a few days back. He hit the ground with a thud. The red sports car continue to speed away, probably in fear of being sued because he hadn't stopped at a stop sign.
Sonja's eyes were full of tears, how could she be so careless? The least damage possible would be various broken bones if he was lucky. She raced to his side while sobbing. She shook him hoping to get a reaction. To her surpise he was still breathing. Lucian sat up and rubbed the back of head. He was slightly dazed by the impact.
"Y-Your still alive? Thank god!" Sonja stuttered before whipping the remaining tears from her face. Lucian vision finally returned to normal. He glanced at Sonja and gasped deeply. The women he had just saved looked exactly like his dear Sonja. He cluched the pendant around his neck thankful that it wasn't damaged.
"What is your name?" He demanded being slightly rude about it. Sonja, however, didn't care if he was rude. He was lucky to be only bruised by such an impact. Somehow she didn't believe that he was still alive. She slowly brought herself back to reality and answered his question, "My name is Sonja."
Lucian was surpised that her name was exactly the same as his lost lover that Victor had killed so long ago. Could this really be Sonja? No she couldn't be she died century's ago, he watched her die their was absolutely no way that she could still be alive. Then a crazy thought came to his mind. Could she actually be the riencarnation of Sonja. "Are you alright mister that car had to be going atleast 80 miles per hour?"
"I'm fine. I was more worried about you." Lucian replied rubbing his fingers across a gash on his forhead. Then he remembered he hadn't introduced himselve to Sonja. "I'm Lucian, I just moved to America today."
Sonja glanced at his face, it looked very familiar. She was going to ask if she new him before, but figured she hadn't since he had only moved to America today. Suddenly she remembered that she had College to attend. She felt really awful about leaving him, but she couldn't miss school besides he said he was okay. "Well maybe we'll meet again the future. I really need to go now."
He watched the women disappear from his veiw before he stood up and dusted himself off. He was thankful that she wasn't hurt, but he wished that she would have stayed with him longer. She reminded himself of his old lover. She looked the same and even had the same name. He tried to brush his crazy thoughts from his mind, Sonja died long ago he didn't want start believing something that couldn't possibly be true.
PERPETRATOR: living dead gurl
FULL NAME: Sonja
SPECIES: Human
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: According to the summary: "..meets a girl who looks like Sonja and even has the same name."
NOTES: It starts off with that looks like could be a good fic with a little polishing. Then the character possession and movie rewriting begins. The end of the prologue and then the first chapter is where it just descends into the flames. Word of advice, don't apologize for the spelling errors and make Word excuses. Beta. Beta now.
Lucian's thoughts were interupted when he heard the engines of a speeding car. He shook his head in shame, probably some dumb teenaged boy showing of his car to his girl friend. Something caught his eye a women crossing the street, Lucian's increased sense of sound could hear the engine of the car speeding faster. Then he realized that that women could actually be in danger.
His Lycan speed allowed him to travel faster then an ordinary human. He pushed the women aside and before the car smashed into him sending him over the top of the car before hitting the ground like the time Selene had hit him with her car a few days back. He hit the ground with a thud. The red sports car continue to speed away, probably in fear of being sued because he hadn't stopped at a stop sign.
Sonja's eyes were full of tears, how could she be so careless? The least damage possible would be various broken bones if he was lucky. She raced to his side while sobbing. She shook him hoping to get a reaction. To her surpise he was still breathing. Lucian sat up and rubbed the back of head. He was slightly dazed by the impact.
"Y-Your still alive? Thank god!" Sonja stuttered before whipping the remaining tears from her face. Lucian vision finally returned to normal. He glanced at Sonja and gasped deeply. The women he had just saved looked exactly like his dear Sonja. He cluched the pendant around his neck thankful that it wasn't damaged.
"What is your name?" He demanded being slightly rude about it. Sonja, however, didn't care if he was rude. He was lucky to be only bruised by such an impact. Somehow she didn't believe that he was still alive. She slowly brought herself back to reality and answered his question, "My name is Sonja."
Lucian was surpised that her name was exactly the same as his lost lover that Victor had killed so long ago. Could this really be Sonja? No she couldn't be she died century's ago, he watched her die their was absolutely no way that she could still be alive. Then a crazy thought came to his mind. Could she actually be the riencarnation of Sonja. "Are you alright mister that car had to be going atleast 80 miles per hour?"
"I'm fine. I was more worried about you." Lucian replied rubbing his fingers across a gash on his forhead. Then he remembered he hadn't introduced himselve to Sonja. "I'm Lucian, I just moved to America today."
Sonja glanced at his face, it looked very familiar. She was going to ask if she new him before, but figured she hadn't since he had only moved to America today. Suddenly she remembered that she had College to attend. She felt really awful about leaving him, but she couldn't miss school besides he said he was okay. "Well maybe we'll meet again the future. I really need to go now."
He watched the women disappear from his veiw before he stood up and dusted himself off. He was thankful that she wasn't hurt, but he wished that she would have stayed with him longer. She reminded himself of his old lover. She looked the same and even had the same name. He tried to brush his crazy thoughts from his mind, Sonja died long ago he didn't want start believing something that couldn't possibly be true.
